Change of backstory

Sorry if I am way off the grid of be confusing, but I think the story for Jack has to be tweaked. If Jack completed the story and defeated Ethos, how would there be a possible sequel where Jack isn't Erohi once again? That is why I was thinking of a change where Jack is not a reincarnation of Erohi himself. Instead, Jack will be the descendant of the Queen of Hearts, making him hated in the village, but they cheer up to him as he stopped Ethos. Also, should Jack have a serious but kind-hearted personality?

Kind hearted definitely, doesn't have to be serious but it's fine.

Serious at the right times. Could be serious around strangers, but is normal to his close friends. Good change of backstory.

You know what, I am just going to make him a jolly character who likes to laugh sometimes. So do I just make him smile a lot and just laugh during happy times? I don't want to make him serious but kind hearted because that will make him exactly like Kirito from SAO

And make that laugh sound terrible so people hate him?

no, I dont want the people to hate him just because of his laugh. Maybe what should I do about his jolly nature instead of using laughter for some moments?

mess things up?

Maybe I will just stick with being modest.

Sounds good

Also, I think I will change the origins of Wonderland backstory, since it sounds too much like Maplestory's.

The main antagonist of the story is now Llorac. There are only two creators of wonderland, the evil being Llorac and the other being Siwel. The two have created wonderland, with Llorac creating mental power while Siwel creates physical power. Llorac then sees that he could dominate his sister's rule when he saw how powerful the mind is over the physical body. So, he decides to take over Wonderland by destroying both mental strength and physical strength to create a new world that is under his power.

Well, now does it sound better with the new legend? Also, can you guess where the names, Llorac and Siwel came from?

^^ That sounds pretty good for storyline purposes. A modest nature is also good. I'll do your topic over the weekend. So all in the one topic?

For the jolly bit, maybe just make it like a cool laugh, like a 'Hollywood Star' or something that makes him loveable. Then the modest aspect won't make im cocky like a Hollywood star.